ODVision YouTube Intro clips - feedback please

~S~ All,

These are just tests for now, but I would like to know what you think of them in principle. This is why I would like a higher resolution EAF Logo…I may do some others, but for tonight these are my first two!


//youtu.be/_0SlfWvXyNk
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//youtu.be/aZ7z2iUi7lc
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I’m happy for all feedback :smiley:

first one!

countdown doesn’t add anything to the video

Personally speaking I prefer the first one, but then again I aint no expert:D

Stevie

I was leaning to the first one. There are more differences though!

I prefer the second one, I like count down

The first…but try to invert the logo movement, the first come out from the Hud, and the Eaf logo goes inside the Hud, first you shoot…

First, but the EAF logo fades out and moves out of frame before you can study it. Actually only its upper half is shown before it is off-screen and fades out.

So make both logos last a few seconds longer so they both can be read twice is my minimal rule of thumb. The lense flare is nice but obstructs the 79 insignia text slightly. I’m not bothered having lense flares but perhaps some people want to read without pausing the vid.

All in all just small nitpicking, keep up the good work OD! :smiley:

PS: the combat footage in the background is from the Wallace & Gromit edition! :banana:

It is! :w00t: I wanted a shot of a burning aircraft and it was the first to hand. There is also one of a head to head with Bf110 from the SoW finale. Not made that yet though!

The logos were seeing what I can do for now, they need tweaking. The EAF one is fast because of the low quality (for now) If anyone knows how to remake it I’d be very grateful! I don’t know where I am going to find the time to play at doing that. I’m pushing the boundaries of the time that I am getting on the computer! Not going to be able to get near it tonight - might get some time tomorrow though.

To do:
[ol]
[li]Make EAF logo last longer
[/li][li]Make an image with both logos?
[/li][li]I’d like to make a way for the logos to combine, but that’s way beyond my capabilities.
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I was also wondering about the Black and White footage or coloour footage? I think I prefer Black and White, tempted to do all of the films like that.

Why not BW. We can have yours in BW and mine in colour to spice things up a bit. If we remember to record tracks we can have BW guncams!

Learnt some new tricks this morning…going to have another play!

Ok, so version 3. All new.

//youtu.be/cKpa2R1UDkQ

Honestly, no…

That isn’t really feedback, but ok.

You’re right, OD… :slight_smile: Sorry, for my poor english, but I prefere the number 1 and number 2 version, I don’t like that…only this. I don’t like the sparklings lights, and the movie with the Bf 110 near pass.

It’s ok, it’s nota problem :slight_smile: What about the change to the logos? Better? I wasn’t sure about the lights around the text. It’s all experimenting at the moment - but I thought I preferred the 110 close fly-by.

I’ll see what else I have got :smiley:

I would like both to be next to each other and fully visible, also cuts down time if you want to show something in the background.

If you could find something else than purple diamonds flashing, that would be great! Perhaps rain? Very British!

And below both emblems just to help speed up the reading, you write what they say

79 Squadron | EAF - European Air Force
-----Motto--------------Motto

~S~
Not played with the images yet, but how about this?

//youtu.be/qk3I5G2KivA

Ok, I hope this is my final one. I’ve included the updated logo…

//youtu.be/PNiY9dpDA4M